I'd never noticed that before! Don't be nervous of telling me stuff like that, it's the kind of criticism I need (and want) :)
Er... I might have to re-write parts of the next chapter o_O I can only think of one (ooh, make that two!) dreams Alistair might have. Oh God, I do have to rewite that bit. It's just too delicious!
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Date: 2010-11-20 05:40 pm (UTC)Er... I might have to re-write parts of the next chapter o_O I can only think of one (ooh, make that two!) dreams Alistair might have. Oh God, I do have to rewite that bit. It's just too delicious!